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Monday 20 May 2019

The Scary Haunted House

The dark day i saw the moon going down as soon i go to sleep the clouds was moving and it was so  scared that night . But Then i walk outside with my Flashlight and my dog i walk down stairs and then somebody was knocking on the door like somebody is coming to kill me but as i look out the window it was the stick on the trees was making that noise.

Before i walked back upstairs i went down ran fast down stairs and go outside and  check what is in that house and my dog was scared because that has not being busted down and that house has stayed right across where i live .


My dog and I walk to the house and look inside when we were at the front door the Mat said Welcome in and when i look down i saw many stuff it was empty like there was nothing nobody lives there because what happen is that it was not that scary at all but then when i went inside  i saw so many rooms and then i went in the first door with my dog and it was so much fun but the scary thing was the mirror it look so gaint and when i saw that mirror it was so bad because i scream out loud and it was so bad .


Before i hit out i saw a girl out the room i ran but she walked and i asked her are you alone she was so angry and she saw a spider  and that spider and then when then what happen was she disappear .

Hahaha she will never Disappear like that and it was just that i am scary of people that come in and when i went in and i saw her running away i have not seen her running away like that .




STORY WILL BE CONTINUE

3 comments:

  1. Hi my names Leilani I'm a year 7 from Otaki College.
    I really like your story and how you described it in different ways.Maybe next time you could fix some of your grammar and punctuation.

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  2. Hello!
    I'm Annelise, a year 7 from Otaki college. I think the Idea and story line was interesting, but you could work on your grammar and punctuation.
    Feel free to look at my blog.
    Annelise :)

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  3. Hello
    I'm Kalolaine and i am a year 7 from Glenbrae school i would like to say thank you very much for commenting on my blog i will make sure to look at yours .

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